Dog I thought you had a nice premise, but I just wasn’t feeling it enough, y’na saying? Sex video Good luck holmes! 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-15 05:36:57Yeah more details yo. Peacess!!!anonymous readerReport 2011-04-30 22:48:35ummmm…what the fuck was that?Anonymous readerReport 2009-07-11 12:47:12horribly writtenAnonymous readerReport 2009-06-15 18:40:02dear christ this is terrible. Also add in some symbolism while you at it. Dog I thought you had a nice premise, but I just wasn’t feeling it enough, y’na saying? atleast even the lowest rated stories like Roberto’s Feast ended up being unintentionally funny. I just needed more details. Aight? Good luck holmes! meh.Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-15 13:07:52that could have been a much better story if you had taken your time instead of rushing through it… 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-15 05:36:57Yeah more details yo.




















