Don’t change a thing with your writing style; even the somewhat less than perfect, yet realistic endings add a level of depth that most stories on this sight are missing. Thanks though for the fab post, your work is easy to read even though they’re really long , its a pleasure I like ’em long !! Beeg.com *****anonymous readerReport 2011-04-22 01:26:02I think it was a great story but i would like to suggest a part two where the four of them get together every once in a while but mary and peter are still just as in love with each other but no charges when the four are with each other,its just a thought i really love your work though.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-16 01:45:57Wonderful as
