This seems like it could have become a good series but you ended it too soon. Beeg sex 7 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-10-19 02:45:13You should use smaller paragraphs for good impressionanonymous readerReport 2012-10-22 21:09:56alittle corny but it is really good. This seems like it could have become a good series but you ended it too soon. You should have been a little more forthcoming on their being chased & given more info on how their army grew by meeting certain characters and why they picked that town, etc..anonymous readerReport 2012-01-06 19:28:24The dashed line is too long as it kicks in the horizontal scrollbar at the bottom, keep it shorter.
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