Also, think about continuity and having even a fantasy make sense.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 21:42:31Pretty great story. Porn video Detail matters. And I agree with the other comment about being a virgin thing. With not much detail. Detail matters. Detail matters. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-06 11:10:21It would have been an alright story line if u knew how to write properly. But 1 thing is you said she was a virgin so no matter she would have felt pain when that guy rammed his dick in her pussy. You should definitely make a part two. It felt like you were just listing everything that happened. You should definitely make a part two. It was a little short & didn’t have much detail but all around a great
