Could have been a great story but you fucking blew it. 4 comments«1»demck23Report 2011-04-18 12:58:50good story line just have more action & have him do more to her . Beeg Just wonderful. 4 comments«1»demck23Report 2011-04-18 12:58:50good story line just have more action & have him do more to her . Just wonderful. Could have been a great story but you fucking blew it. Just wonderful. What an asshole. Just wonderful. Just wonderful. You’ve earned this NEGATIVE VOTE.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-12 21:46:16to short it could have been a hole lot better it a great start to a story u just need more detail and u have a great hit.«1» Just wonderful.
