Not bad at all. Great story 10 / 10READERReport 2006-02-28 22:36:49Well it was very good but the ending was a little fuzzy(no I don’t mean like a pussy), it wasn’t the ending I was looking forward too. Beeg XXX 4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-03-01 18:37:47Loved it!! Great story 10 / 10READERReport 2006-02-28 22:36:49Well it was very good but the ending was a little fuzzy(no I don’t mean like a pussy), it wasn’t the ending I was looking forward too. Oh and if the writer reads this take it as constructiv criticisome, not a mean one, Ok!READERReport 2006-02-28 20:23:08hey good story! But it was overall a good story.
