That, along with everything else (including the atrocious grammar) ruined the entire plot for me. Beeg XXX 192 comments«12345»steveblastsReport 2020-03-21 01:42:20Hot three way action. I READ YOUR WORK WHEN FIRST POSTED AND HAVE THOUGHT ABOUT IT SINCE. IF YOU WISH TO GO PUBLIC, YOU CAN! CoachAnonymous readerReport 2015-06-27 04:47:47I’ve just recently been reading the author’s running story line. Rhiannon leaves in a few grammatical and spelling errors but nothing you can’t easily figure out.Anonymous readerReport 2014-10-11 05:31:05Long chapter of women drinking and bonding, drinking and shopping, drinking and becoming bi-sexual. And what is with all the damn commas where they’re not needed?«12345» Typos are like potholes, they slow or disrupt your journey if they are large or if there are a lot.
