Try this: Once the story is written, (before publishing) try to read it back to yourself ALOUD. Beeg This is all a bunch of lies and made up from little Johnny jokes«1» Go back to school for 5 or 9 years, cut 3 inches off that dick, and then “tire” again.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-28 11:35:15What a waste of thirty seconds. At one point you correctly used a possessive apostrophe but at others it is missing, also occasionally the final ‘s’ is missing. As has been noted elsewhere 6’3″ (at 14 years old) and a 10″ cock (at any age) is stretching the bounds of the believable towards the realm of the impossible.
