This is the first time i’ve ever written a story, so constructive criticism is more than welcome 🙂
Ashley and her boyfriend of a year were your average couple. Oh shit, he thought, praying she wont notice, he begins to stutter excuses to leave. Sex video “Well, I’ve only got a few bags and boxes, so if it’s ok with you guys, I’d love to move in tonight!” Rhiannon said, a hint of weary in her voice. Feeling refreshed, Ashley walks into the living room to Jake and Rhiannon in deep conversation about cars. “I won’t disappoint you guys.”
The three roomies sat down to discuss when she’d move in. What the fuck is wrong with me, Ashley asks herself
Jake hasn’t said a word.
Actors:
Martin Gun / Una Fairy
