I agree: “Nice beginning, but ending sucked”. Beeg sex 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-23 23:08:36pretty good but could be longer…im looking forward to a second partAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-21 03:56:31ur fifteen and ur cock is 8 inchesREADERReport 2008-02-05 16:16:02A 15-16 year-old friend is gonna want to do it with the hottie he was making out with, not the ass of a buddy. go out and practice, skippy, and then come back and try to write something worth reading.READERReport 2007-11-18 16:13:13Good build up, but it ended up finishing far too quick«12» you must be a sad, lonely, desperate virgin who has no idea what it’s actually like to fuck, letalone kiss someone. If your story is about a pool party, get laid in or around the pool.
