Examples: then instead of than (they actually have different meanings); “grab my hand” instead of “grabbed my hand”; “pushes me gentle back” should be “pushes me gently back”. Take time to proofread your story. Beeg XXX Writing is like everything else, practice makes perfect and if you work at it you can acheive greatness.«12» First, proofread your work several times. Good luck.anonymous readerReport 2011-02-19 12:31:57Great start, good pacing and interesting characters. However, I loved the theme and the characters. Writing is like everything else, practice makes perfect and if you work at it you can acheive greatness.«12» First, proofread your work several times. Writing is like everything else, practice makes perfect and if you work at it you can acheive greatness.«12»
