Also, try building up to the sex, it will keep the audience engaged. Beeg 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-13 15:12:03Im going to be honest. lol.«1» You have potential but it needs a lot of work. Finally work on your structure, a new line for a new speaker.diehard25flReport 2011-09-26 22:17:51good fake story. You have potential but it needs a lot of work. You have potential but it needs a lot of work. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-13 15:12:03Im going to be honest. Finally work on your structure, a new line for a new speaker.diehard25flReport 2011-09-26 22:17:51good fake story.
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