That story sucked ass as well, take the hint and please, next time you decide to write take a hammer and smash every one of your fingers!!! Really, don’t hold back, hit them hard you moron!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 12:22:26totally agree with other readers, crap, gave up after first paragraph«12» Since its grammatical errors is the issues, that is fixable. Beeg porn I should be able to turn another part soon.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 19:35:26This is utter and complete shit, yet you decided to write another story after this. If you don’t like find somewhere else, but if you can let me try and improve you may be surprised. 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-12 11:58:05Achilles &Briseis Faranonymous readerReport 2013-02-08 21:43:09needs a total rewrite by a GOOD WRITER that knows enough
