good story :)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-18 10:23:29That was a great beginning to a great story! Tell us about his eyes, his lips, skin tone, be vivid when describing. Beeg sex 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-29 08:55:31Well done, thanks! good story :)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-18 10:23:29That was a great beginning to a great story! 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-29 08:55:31Well done, thanks! 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-29 08:55:31Well done, thanks! Please continue this is going to be amazing!«12» You got me a bit confused in the middle and you weren’t very creative with the character descriptions. Tell us about his eyes, his lips, skin tone, be vivid when describing. Please tell us more about Greg and Lukas!anonymous readerReport 2013-05-22 11:11:37This pstiong knocked my socks offanonymous readerReport 2013-05-18 20:21:53it wont let me continue, i wrote the next
