28 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-12 07:27:59You should break your story into small paragraphs so it is easy on reader’s eyes and they can understand the it better. Then I passed it to all those other guys at the parties, and to my wonderful, loving, trusting husband.READERReport 2005-12-28 02:29:37i like the story as a whole but you didn’t go into enough detail, sorry but it didn’t have me cumming at all. Beeg.com you need to go into more stimulating detail but you have the basic story line great 6/10«12345» 28 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-12 07:27:59You should break your story into small paragraphs so it is easy on reader’s eyes and they can understand the it better.
