all down to balls!!! Beeg.com Also, try to sharpen up characterization and personal details. all down to balls!!! For the most part, you seem all about pure raunch and hedonism (which is what I love about this series), but you take some unexpected detours into m/m and romantic stuff. Instead of referring to “piss girl” or “pregnant chick”, try giving them names (even if they are merely assumed, such as Piss Girl or Pregnant Chick) and using more descriptive detail. his best friend is My job!!! his best friend is My job!!! his best friend is My job!!! all down to balls!!!
